Score: 8

"Great, but still room for improvement."

submission: LoZ: Link's Epic Quest

date: December 2, 2009

I honestly enjoyed this a lot, but I think there are a few things that could be made even better. Here's my review, broken down a bit.

Sound: The voices were pretty good, and the sound effects weren't too generic. I did recognize a couple of them, such as the Counter-Strike walking noises, and some clanging sounds. Dialogue was humorous and original.

Originality: In contrast to your last work, this one actually has some rhyme and reason to it. In other words, a plot. Instead of feeling like we're just being dragged along on this strange adventure. Still has a sense of confusion as far as world transitions go, but that's the essence of the movie. Although I can't really give you originality for characters, that's the point of a spoof like this, to parody on things that already exist.

Animation: Although I have seen far worse, your animation could use some work. Walking and other motions look klunky, and rather defy the laws of gravity, momentum and other physics. During the fight scenes, characters just kinda floated through space. The swordfighting was kinda bland. You need your movements, jumping, sword-swipes and the like to look more believable.

Artwork: Your attention to detail really shows here. Nice backgrounds, good-looking characters and props, really drawn well in general. Definitely keep this up.

All in all, you've got a long way to go. But you've got a great idea here, and plenty of effort. Keep improving your work, and you'll be amazed at how much better you'll have gotten since the first one.

Score: 8

"Aw."

submission: For My Valentine

date: August 18, 2009

That's a shame. Anyone could tell you really cared about him. A great flash, but too bad about who it was for.

Score: 8

"Cool!"

submission: Point and Click Adventure

date: July 6, 2009

I'm having trouble finding the red fuse...

A great game though. Much like the first that I played back in... 2005ish. Nice remake. Do more!